Design Note #1: A pleasing image has been added to the top of the page… it would be better if this image was more representative of the page concerning “Benfits”Design Note #2: A page title has been added
Design Note #3: The page has been split into columns of size 2/3 + 1/3, where teh 2/3 holds text and the 1/3 holds the image
Design Note #4: The image has been changed to one more tall and thin, which the page wants given the length of the text section. It would be better if the image was more representative of the subject-matter (as the previous image… which lacks height).
Design Note #5: Green check-mark icons have been added to the list of benefits to provide more substance and sense of “benefit”
Design Note #6: The text font is larger and more substantial versus the live page to convey a greater sense of benefit